Poem

One of the hobby is to do poem. I will show my poem I did today. This poem is okay and I think it is good. This is the Poem.

Why do I feel so happy when anyone say you are good at something?

Could it be my friends say it ?
Could it be my teacher say it ?
Could it be my parents say it ?
Could it be my worst friend say it ?
Could it be a girl say it?

Why am I so happy when anyone say you are good at something.

Well this was a draft so I think it is not perfect yet.

Another prom is about I wonder… I like this poem becuase it is talking little bit about my life. This is the poem.

I wonder if Korea could win the World Cup.
I wonder it I could be a Mover and Shaker.
I wonder if I am good at soccer and I could make Korea be at least 15th of me. I wonder if I could go to Ocean Park at least once in my life. I wonder if I could have a good life. I wonder if I could go to Brazil or Argentina.
Well these are some of the things I wonder ?

This was about my poem. Thank you for watching and this was by Hoon.

One thought on “Poem

  1. nice blog but you need to make more sense like, is it what my friends said, not could it be my friends say it but other than that well done.