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Draft

Hey guys me again and this time I will show you my draft for writing. Be ready because this is going to be long

“Huf huf huf,” I said walking up the stairs. I had Romain and Ben walking with me. “I’m so tired,” I barely said. We passed some teenagers and Romain said hi to them. I didn’t fell like saying hi to them because I was tired. “Hi,” they said strangely. We were about to leave when Romain turned around and called them idiots. At that very moment I felt scared because picking a fight with a teenager is probably a bad idea. They started to get up. I don’t know how but I ran even though I was tired. We were going down the stairs when Romain tripped and fell on the hard stone. He was laying there crying. Ben was helping up I wasn’t because I said he was fake crying. Ben said to help him so I did. He walked until we were at our apartments then we said goodbye and left.

The next day, I was excited to see Romain and ask him how his leg felt. Ben only came out. “Where’s Romain?” I asked worried. “You know how he hurt his leg last night,” Ben said. I felt a little better cause I didn’t want Romain to catch a cold. Ben and I got on the bus and went to school.

We were about to go to lunch and I was thinking “Ben, Romain, and I were only ones who what had happen to Romain in the whole school.” Romain and his dad came in the class. “Romain!” Everyone yelled. Romain had a cast on his leg so I guessed he either broke it or sprained it. I was glad to see that Romain was ok. Ms. Lim asked Romain if he could tell how he sprained his ankle. Romain started telling the story. While he was telling it I thought it was the same one I saw and heard when it happened. When he was done my class got to ask questions. “Why did you call the teenagers idiots?” Someone asked. “They were making fun of my name,” Romain said. “Were you crying?” Someone else asked. “I was trying to,” Romain said. Right at that moment I jumped up and yelled “I KNEW IT!” Everyone looked at me weird. “Than was there when I sprained my ankle,” he said. “So sprained his ankle,” I thought.

On the bus, Romain and I got to sit at the first row because Romain sprained his ankle. We never got to sit at the front because we were older. I grabbed one of his crutches and pretended it was a gun. When people were walking on I was shooting them. When everyone was on and we were leaving we started shooting people again.

For the next couple of days Romain and I were doing things with his crutches. One day he only had his cast on. I felt kinda sad because I thought it was fun having little battles with people. I wanted for him to run again so we could play our game again. Our moms thought it was dangerous because they think we could fall and hurt ourselves.

At school I usually got to help Romain. Plus I got to ride the elevator. I thought it was cool because I never got to ride it. Sometimes I didn’t want his cast to come off. Sometimes I did.

Finally his cast came off before the end of school so we jumped in the pool the last day and had a great time together.

The End


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