Rosie, I love your courage in telling such an honest story. While I know you may still miss Taiwan, I am glad that you are here at SIS. It is a special place and you have a special space in it.
I like that you told your own feeling during the story but it might be better if you put more about the situation when you met your friends more than the way going to Taiwan.
this is a good story! that really helps me know about you. but its a Nice thing that you’ve go top Taiwan! this is a good choice, but now you’ve came to sis, and sis is a good school. But if you came here, I think you are still missing about your friend in Taiwan. it’s good that you make friends in other culture. and in sis, you can also make good friends! sis’s student are nice. Hope you have fun learning in sis!
This is a really good story that can help me to learn more about you, I know you love going to Taiwan. And you miss your friends too. You are very excited when you arrived to airport. You dance around. You have lot of happy thing in Taiwan.
It’s a true story told with integrity, story is very touching. This story is impressed me is the part of Rosie.J come into her school she study before.In this part,I can feel that Roisie is exciting and nervous.She exciting about she will meet her good friends again,and she also nervous about very friends will ignore him.
Your story sounds wonderful! I wish that I could goto Taiwan becuae I have never been there.
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