Ken! I knew even before I’d listen to yours it would have been sports related. I was so keen on what you had to say. WIthin the first 30 seconds, you said, “not after I sold my soul into this sport”, in mind i was like
” SAME!”. I believe your spirit and your determination for basketball is as inspiring as my passions in my sports that i play. So proud! Always proud, You’re doing great! Nice job K!
Kenneth, there are so many things I loved about your story. Your pace, your tone, the way you built up some moments and had us visualizing your story in real time. Marks of a true storyteller.
I’m so glad you’ve joined #sisrocks this year and can have a whole new set of experiences. I hope you continue to tell your stories to various audiences!
Kenneth, wow, what an amazing story. The imagery right off the bat instantly grabbed my attention, before the story even begun I could feel that anticipation. Just like how you felt each time you were waiting for an email. The way you used something as simple as the coaches hair to reflect his younger years as a metaphor really made every detail stand out.
I really like your story, the way you describe your feeling about what is happening through the cut, also details you add in. I felt like you really did express you emotion and how intense the competition in the basketball team are. I really like your story and thanks for sharing !
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