Ann – 3C SIS
I love your story because it reminded me of when I traveled to New York U.S.A. I liked the part when you said you were looking at the pigeon eating the kernels. Hope you keep on telling your story’s Aditi! Thank you for telling your story!
Wow! I loved the part where your uncle said “let’s take a break” good job Aditi
Mia and Rebecca 3C sis , you’re story was so thoughtful and I liked how you laughed when you said something funny .
Thank you !!!! I love the voice!!!!!!
I think not all movie is about traveling!??
But i luv it!!!
Thank you for sharing this story. I felt like I knew your family as you described them so well through their actions I really enjoyed your presentation too. Your story swept me along on the journey.
I like the part where your uncle said let’s take a break
I like how the first few sentences of the story weren’t direct. It both lured us in and gave us room to try to imagine what’s happening by filling in the blanks ourselves while you do the same when continuing to the next few sentences.
The references to television shows, such as The Real Housewives of Beverly Hills, also seemed to relax the audience and get my personal with you.
I really liked this story, it was well spoken. Good job!
I love the part when your uncle said let’s take a break, like dying.
Thank you! Thai is a really good story to let me know better about you. I like the part you said you were looking at the pigeon eating the kernels. I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for this telling this amazing story.
I think my feelings are same with you the first time too, like… we all wanted to sleep and play our phones. but then I realized that thinking that way can’t help us, we must participate with our family when we go out… so…
But I like your story! its really a nice story! and when the Uncle said let’s take a break, you might feel tired and didn’t wanted to do anything. so… I like your story!
Great story! I really liked how fluent you read the story! 🙂
Aditi! I really loved your story! Your story was very interesting, and I can’t believe how amazing your voice sounds like! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
I really enjoyed toisten to your story, the tone that you used really made me enjoyed. Also the laugh when you said some funny things is good. The details are perfect and in my opinion, it contains all the thing that a good presentation needs.
I like it very much!
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