Flying Fishes – Jill

Comments

  • Ms Gahr December 13, 2018 Reply

    Jill – I really liked your hook, I was engaged in your story from the first sentence. Great voice!

  • Jacob Jenkin December 13, 2018 Reply

    I like how you added a lot of feeling into your story. great job!

  • Summer January 6, 2019 Reply

    I like how you describe the words.

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