Leaving – Evan

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  • Gavin Yuen December 18, 2018 Reply

    I like how you use words to describe the feelings when you notice that your dog dead, and sorry about your dog

  • Simon January 7, 2019 Reply

    I like how you started the story it was a great hook.

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