Next Gear – Emanuele

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  • Jacob Jenkin December 13, 2018 Reply

    Good story! I like your idea and all the twists and turns in your story. But it was not inches away it was milimiters. Thanks again and good job for really getting deep In to your imagination in that story well done!

  • Misha Wu December 22, 2018 Reply

    Noice! I like all the detail in this story! I didn’t hear a lot of VSPITE though, I think you could work on that! This story is very dramatic!
    Also, Jacob and I**… I just wanted to point that out.
    (Can we appreciate how the antispam message was “lung pain” before I refreshed)

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