Level Up – Katelyn

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  • Rachel Cho January 6, 2019 Reply

    I like how you described your feeling in lots of details so the reader can really know what you are talking about, and how you were feeling at the moment 🙂 Maybe next time you can exaggerate some words like when you said “I felt like I was hit by a rock”

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