Up on the Rock – Iris

Comments

  • Joanna January 4, 2019 Reply

    I like your cover and your title lets want to listen to your story

  • Kiki January 6, 2019 Reply

    The speed is a bit too fast! Try going slower. I like how you use words in your story.

  • Summer January 6, 2019 Reply

    I like that you started with have you ever.

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