I loved your story! Although you were nervous about taking this trip with new people, I’m so glad you were able to experience the beauty of Yosemite! You did a nice job of including a range of details about your experience. It was very clear what was going through your mind during the trip as well as what you were seeing and experiencing in the park. I’d love to visit that waterfall some day!
I love your story, good job trying to do new things with new people! I like the funny things you added and how you expressed yourself in amazing ways! Good job keeping it up even when things were not the best, are you glad that you got to do this after you did it? I hope you had fun, it must have been beautiful.
Yes it was really beautiful, I would never trade it for anything.
Your story is very well done! I like the expression you used. It is fun for me to hear the story because I know the girls that you are talking about. Good for you for doing something you were unsure about and sticking with it! Your description makes me want to go to the waterfall. I don’t know if we would be able to see a rainbow but it sounds like it is an amazingly beautiful place! We should go to Yosemite on our way back from Lake Tahoe someday.
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