13 thoughts on “Joanne | 5A

  1. Joanne,

    What a powerfully vulnerable piece you have written. Your writing and voice sends a message we ALL need to hear, at any age. Perfection is such a trap, because, it is our imperfections that make us beautifully human. I admire your confidence in staying true to yourself, regardless of what other people think.

    Thank you for sharing your voice with us.
    Sincerely,
    Ms. G

  2. Joanne,
    How did you write this story?! it shows an important message that tells everybody they don’t have to be perfect to get cool friends,
    THANKS FOR SHARING THIS STORY!
    -Madeline

  3. You did a great job being vulnerable and sharing your feelings in this podcast. What a wonderful lesson you are sharing with us, that we should accept ourselves and be with people who accept us, instead of wanting to change for people who are unkind to us. Thank you!

  4. Joanne, you were awesome! You expressed your emotions very well, I can picture every single moment in my mind, you also had a nice descriptive!

  5. How in the world did you summon up this much courage in order to write this? I know for a fact that I would be unable to be this vulnerable and express my personal emotions using this way. Your story has touched the hearts of every single person who has listened to your tale. Keep on being who you are, and shine your light!

  6. Hey Joanne, I really liked your podcast. I like how you put many details 🙂 keep up your great work in middle school.

    -Kate 4B

  7. You showed your feelings with expression and great figurative language. Also you wrote about a great theme.

  8. Joanne,
    When I first read this memoir, I thought this memoir was brave because you shared all your thought about being perfect. I really appreciate that you could say your experience to everyone. You also used many different vocabulary words and it has lots of figurative language. Everyone should be themselves!

    -Kathy 5A

  9. Joanne, you have a strong emotion when you are reading the dialog, you also write all the important information in this story! This podcast is awesome!

  10. Joanne, you have a strong emotion when you are reading the dialog, you also write all the important information in this story! This podcast is awesome!

  11. Joanne, your podcast is full of emotions and details. I really liked it. Keep your work!
    -Kay 5a

  12. Joanne, I just love all the figurative language you add in your memoir. Your story express your emotions perfectly. It helps you learn a lesson and people who also are like this.

    Isa

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