21 thoughts on “Sienna | 4C

  1. Hi Sienna,

    What a chilling story indeed! And the twist ending?? Such good storytelling! By the way, I have also been hearing footsteps in my room at night… What could it be??

    Thank you for sharing your story and voice with us.
    Sincerely,
    Ms. G

  2. That was so creepy! I like how it ends in a cliffhanger! It leaves me wondering, what happens next? Who is the lady?

    Sincerely,
    Brooke

  3. I like how you make us scared 😟 and the words you give are good explaining word

  4. Hi Sienna,
    I like how you left the end with everybody thinking (no happy ending). But I think you should put some expression on reading the story next time.
    -Eric

  5. Wow Sienna! This story was super detailed and creepy. you did so good on giving people goosebumps! great job!
    Madeline(:

  6. WOW! Sienna you did so great on giving the people who listened to this goosebumps! GREAT JOB!!

    -Madeline

  7. Awesome story! It is the most interesting one in the 4th grade podcast!

  8. Great story, this story is really interesting and scary. Good job.

  9. Interesting story! I really liked the ending and it’s definitely scary.

  10. Sienna,
    I love the expression you made when you were reading this chilling story. I git goosebumps, too! Awesome job! But I expect you to have a deep theme next time(I am not sure if this one has it). Keep it up and create more stories!

    -Kathy 5A

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